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describe a gift you recently give to someone

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I recently gave a gift to my friend, who is my soulmate. I have known her since I was 5 years old as our parents are friends and we went to the same school. Our friendship has grown even stronger now that we are adults. She is one of the kindest persons I have ever met as she is thoughtful, considerate and always gets through all problems easily. She always helps me whenever I have difficulty or I’m bit down in the dumps, so I admire her so much. The gift that I gave her was a book as she is keen on reading books. It was a bit of an expensive issue for me but I don’t care much about the expenses when I see the smiling face of the receiver. That’s a Quiet Flows the Don which is a celebrated novel of Russian. I became knowledgeable about this when I watched the movie adapted from this novel and I’m extremely impressed. Therefore, I made up my mind to buy it for my best friend. Interestingly enough, she was also keen on this, the book is her dream. I think that a gift is a wise choice as she could gain knowledge. Moreover, in many countries, books symbolize the fortunate, and I expect that she will be blessed. By reading books, she could apply the wisdom to improve herlife. Besides, books contain awareness that can change lives. The value of them cannot compare to other subjects. It is not an exaggeration to say that life would be monotonous without books.
I recently gave a gift to my friend, who is my soulmate. I have known her since I was 5 years
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as our parents are
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friends and
we went to the same school. Our friendship has grown even stronger
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that we are adults.

She is one of the kindest persons I have ever met as she is thoughtful, considerate and always
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through all problems
easily
. She always
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helps
me whenever I have difficulty or I’m
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bit
down in the dumps,
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I admire her
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so
much.

The gift that I gave her was a
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book
as she is keen on reading
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books
. It was a bit of an expensive issue for me
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I don’t care much about the expenses when I
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see
the smiling face of the receiver. That’s a Quiet Flows the Don which is a celebrated novel of Russian. I became knowledgeable about this when I
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watched
the movie adapted from this novel and I’m
extremely
impressed.
Therefore
, I made up my mind to
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buy
it for my best friend.
Interestingly
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, she was
also
keen on this, the
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book
is her dream.

I
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think
that a gift is a wise choice as she could gain knowledge.
Moreover
, in
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many
countries,
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books
symbolize the fortunate, and I
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expect
that she will
be blessed
. By reading
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books
, she could apply the wisdom to
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improve
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herlife
.
Besides
,
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books
contain awareness that can
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change
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lives
. The value of them cannot compare to other subjects. It is not an exaggeration to say that life would be monotonous without
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IELTS essay describe a gift you recently give to someone

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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