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Describe a place you remember well that full of colours

Describe a place you remember well that full of colours Dq9x7
Generally speaking, I always try my best to add as much colour in my life as possible, as different colours give me alternative feelings, which seems to control my emotion and make me feel positive. In fact, the spring flower market was a place that was full of colour and it gave me an indescribable feeling. As I remember, before Tet, I and my mom had a small trip to the flower market to buy flowers and to decorate my house. When we arrived at the market, my sleepiness because of getting up at 5 am was gone, since in front of me was a large number of colourful flowers: peach blossom, roses, gerbera, etc. There was a tendency that it was a flower festival. The market was crowded, people from children to adults, the older picked out and purchased their favourite flowers. Thus, I’m not an exception. I smell flowers fragrance and contemplate them. I even saw birds and butterflies which were hardly seen in urban areas. The scenery of the market was really gorgeous, it described an aspect of spring, which was fresh, lively and splendid. However, when my mom told me that we had finished shopping, I was regretful because the amount of time I spent on this trip was so little. After going home, I took a last look and the panorama of the market was a masterpiece. Until now, I still remember that trip clearly as the market was so beautiful and it gave me a fresh feeling and another aspect of a traditional market.
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speaking, I always try my best to
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add
as much
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colour
in my life as possible, as
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different
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colours
give me alternative feelings, which seems to control my emotion and
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make
me feel
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positive
. In fact, the spring
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flower
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market
was a place that was full of
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colour
and it gave me an indescribable feeling. As I remember,
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before
Tet, I and my mom had a
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small
trip to the
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flower
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market
to
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buy
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flowers
and to decorate my
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house
. When we arrived at the
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market
, my sleepiness
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because
of getting up at 5 am
was gone
, since in front of me was
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a large number of
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colourful
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flowers
: peach blossom, roses,
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gerbera
, etc. There was a tendency that it was a
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flower
festival. The
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market
was crowded
,
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people
from children to adults, the older picked out and
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purchased
their
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favourite
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flowers
.
Thus
, I’m not an exception. I smell
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flowers
fragrance and contemplate them. I even
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saw
birds and butterflies which were hardly
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seen
in urban areas. The scenery of the
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market
was
really
gorgeous, it
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described
an aspect of spring, which was fresh, lively and splendid.
However
, when my mom
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told
me that we had finished shopping, I was regretful
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because
the amount of time I spent on this trip was
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so
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little
. After going home, I took a last look and the panorama of the
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market
was a masterpiece. Until
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now
, I
still
remember that trip
clearly
as the
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market
was
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so
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beautiful
and it gave me a fresh feeling and another aspect of a traditional
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market
.
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IELTS essay Describe a place you remember well that full of colours

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
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