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Describe a place you have visited

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Last summer, my parents took me to the zoo. I was very nervous and excited. It's big and crowded but very wide, I could run around without worrying about colliding with anyone, there, I could see many big and interesting animals like an elephant or a giraffe and so on. At the end of the trip, my parents led me to a big cage, and then there were a lot of monkeys jumping out that startled me and they made fun looks, that the most memorable trip of the trip. I hope that my parents will lead me to many another more interesting places

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