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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of technological advanced communications such as texting, e-mails, and video calls.

Face-to-face communication is better than other types of technological advanced communications such as texting, e-mails, and video calls. ORbgy
There is no denying the fact that this is an era of technological advancement. It is often argued that face-to-face interaction is better than other kinds of high-tech advanced interactions like chatting, emails, and facetime calls. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement for several reasons. First and foremost, technological communication is absolutely convenient to participate with others compared to live interaction. To be more precise, modern technologies serve enormous advantages regarding the participation among individuals such as easy access, no payment required, and long distances communication as such desirable methods use the benefit of internet connection. Generally exemplified, the majority of organizations have started using video conferences as participants will no longer need to travel. Furthermore, these modern interaction methods can enhance the better relationships of humans. In other words, since everybody is able to communicate with others whenever and wherever they desire, people can comfortably keep in touch with their family and groups of friends. On the exemplary, today both parents and children habitually send text messages as a part of lifestyles while they are far from each other, resulting in stronger family bonding. In this regard, it is certainly clear that such advanced communications could make society be more united. On the flip side, despite the notable benefits of using innovative participation, face-to-face communication can make people have physical interaction contributing to numerous enjoyable purposes. More precisely, people will be able to socialize with others by gathering or hanging out which commonly are the preferable participation activities among individuals. In conclusion, high-tech advanced interactions play a significant role in the convenience of participation and the stronger relationships of society. Consequently, I would like to reiterate that these modern participation methods are not worse than live interaction
There is no denying the fact that this is an era of technological advancement. It is

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often
argued that face-to-face
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interaction
is better than
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other
kinds of high-tech

advanced
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interactions
like chatting, emails, and
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facetime
calls.
Personally
, I

strongly
disagree with this statement for several reasons.

First
and foremost, technological communication is
absolutely
convenient to

participate with others compared to
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live
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interaction
. To be more precise, modern

technologies serve enormous advantages regarding the
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participation
among

individuals such as easy access, no payment required, and long distances

communication as such desirable methods
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use
the benefit of internet connection.

Generally
exemplified, the majority of organizations have
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started
using video

conferences as participants will no longer need to travel.

Furthermore
, these modern
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interaction
methods can enhance the better

relationships of humans. In
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other
words, since everybody is able to communicate

with others whenever and wherever they desire,
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people
can
comfortably
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keep
in

touch with their family and groups of friends. On the exemplary,
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today
both

parents and children
habitually
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send
text messages as a part of lifestyles while

they are far from each
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other
, resulting in stronger family bonding. In this regard, it

is
certainly
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clear
that such advanced communications could
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make
society be

more united.

On the flip side, despite the notable benefits of using innovative participation,

face-to-face communication can
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make
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people
have physical interaction

contributing to numerous enjoyable purposes. More
precisely
,
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people
will be able

to socialize with others by gathering or hanging out which
commonly
are the

preferable
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participation
activities among individuals.

In conclusion
, high-tech advanced
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interactions
play a significant role in the

convenience of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
participation
and the stronger relationships of society.

Consequently
, I would like to reiterate that these modern
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
participation
methods

are not worse than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interaction
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IELTS essay Face-to-face communication is better than other types of technological advanced communications such as texting, e-mails, and video calls.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
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