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Describe a place where you live

Describe a place where you live brD8l
I live in Binh Duong which is a big city with a lot of green trees surrounding it and there are a variety of restaurants and department stores. In this city, i frequently go to the park to walk my dog around the fountain and contemplate colorful flowers with my best friend at school. People behave in a perfectly ordinary manner forward me. They are my neighbour and they like to talk with me. I often play badminton with some kids in the playground at the weekend. As i know about them, they are so friendly and comfortable. Besides, the air and wind make me feel gracious to sleep so that is why i like to live there.
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Binh
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Duong
which is a
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big
city with
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a lot of
green trees surrounding it and there are a variety of restaurants and department stores. In this city,
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i
frequently
go to the park to walk my dog around the fountain and contemplate colorful flowers with my best friend at school.
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People
behave in a
perfectly
ordinary manner forward me. They are my
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neighbour and
they like to talk with me. I
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often
play badminton with
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some
kids in the playground
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at the weekend
. As
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i
know about them,
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they


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are
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so
friendly and comfortable.
Besides
, the air and wind
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make
me feel gracious to sleep
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so
that is
why
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i
like to
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live
there.
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IELTS essay Describe a place where you live

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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