Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Describe a place where you had a holiday that you enjoyed

Describe a place where you had a holiday that you enjoyed pXOea
Last year, my family and I went to the coastal city of Nha Trang. It is a very popular tourist destination. We decided to go there by plane. It took about an hour to fly there. We were in Nha Trang for a week. We tried a lot of new things such as skydiving, surfing, and snorkeling to see the reef. There were a lot of people swimming, sunbathing, playing volleyball on the shore, and some children even built sandcastles and flew kites. This place has one of the most beautiful beaches in Vietnam. The weather there was wonderful. The atmosphere was very clean and fresh, which made me feel very comfortable. Also, the food there was so unique and delicious. I got to experience a lot of new things that I can't find anywhere else, and it's really exciting. This was an unforgettable trip
Last year, my family and I went to the coastal city of
Nha
Trang
. It is a
very
popular tourist destination. We decided to go there by
plane
. It took about an hour to
fly
there.

We were in
Nha
Trang
for a week. We tried
a lot of
new things such as skydiving, surfing, and snorkeling to
see
the reef. There were
a lot of
people
swimming, sunbathing, playing volleyball on the shore, and
some
children even built sandcastles and flew kites. This place has one of the most
beautiful
beaches in Vietnam. The weather there was wonderful. The atmosphere was
very
clean and fresh, which made me feel
very
comfortable.
Also
, the food there was
so
unique and delicious. I
got
to experience
a lot of
new things that I can't find anywhere else, and it's
really
exciting. This was an unforgettable
trip
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Describe a place where you had a holiday that you enjoyed

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
144 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts