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Ha Long Bay is a famous coast city that recognizes UNESCO heritage sites. It locates in northeast Quang Ninh province. The thousands of islands and caves make feel mysterious and attraction of tourism. Its beauty blow guest away and long-lasting impression in the hearts of visitors. Many islands cover natural green and a lot of caves are classic and concealed. From Ha Long Bay can take a boat and explore a breathing view of nature. You take part in activities such as sailing, swimming and windsurfing. Besides the charming nature, you also need to eat plenty of delicious seafood with a cost of the situation. That's wonderful dishes. Futhermovers, the air is refreshing and cool which tourists can travel at any time. In addition, the local people are hospitable, gently and friendly. Ha Long Bay is always a fascinating feature that makes a sense of relaxation, enjoyment and magnificent after hard working days.
Ha Long Bay is a
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famous
coast city that recognizes UNESCO heritage sites. It locates in northeast
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Quang
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Ninh
province. The thousands of islands and caves
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make
feel mysterious and attraction of tourism. Its beauty blow guest away and long-lasting impression in the hearts of visitors.
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Many
islands cover natural green and
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a lot of
caves are classic and concealed. From Ha Long Bay can take a boat and explore a breathing view of nature. You
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take part
in activities such as sailing, swimming and windsurfing.
Besides
the charming nature, you
also
need to eat
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plenty
of delicious seafood with a cost of the situation. That's wonderful dishes.
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Futhermovers
, the air is refreshing and cool which tourists can travel at any time.
In addition
, the local
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people
are hospitable,
gently
and friendly. Ha Long Bay is always a fascinating feature that
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makes
a sense of relaxation, enjoyment and magnificent after
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hard working
days.
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IELTS essay describe a place to visit

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
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5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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