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Describe a piece of equipment that is important in your home.

Describe a piece of equipment that is important in your home. JLqpE

I want to say that, thanks to science; we now live in a modern era that is full of benefits and convenient with cutting-edge technology. As a result, there is an abundance of equipment that assists us on a daily basis, and my family is no exception. We are definitely such technological enthusiasts that we buy a wide range of equipment and use it for a variety of purposes. If I had to pick one, I would say a brand-new laptop that I often use plays an important role in my home. It is a black-colored laptop by the Lenovo brand, and my father bought it for me last year. I would say with it being portable, I use it quite frequently. In the morning, I open it to read the news, listen to music, and complete some homework. In the afternoon and evening, I often join some online classes or watch movies. Anyway, it depends on the day. To be honest, this electronic device has aided me in a variety of ways, but the two main aspects are studying and entertaining myself. First, you know, we are in the grip of the Coronavirus pandemic, so our students can’t go to school and must learn at home through some applications like Zoom or Google Meeting. Therefore, my laptop has become valid more than ever, because I can attend online study classes with a large screen, a high-quality camera, and volume. Moreover, with the Internet available on this device, I can search for many websites and discover lots of information to finish my assignment and broaden my knowledge. Second, my laptop not only supports my study but also helps me amuse myself after a long period of learning. I am immersed in various genres of entertainment, from surfing the Internet, watching films, and playing games, to keeping in touch with my friends and relatives. Finally, because of its benefits, I consider it to be a piece of disposable equipment in this civilized society. You need to keep up with the times because the world is ever-evolving and computer skill is a must skill today. Once more, thanks to this top-notch device, I will preserve and utilize it wisely.

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now
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live
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, there is an abundance of equipment that assists us on a daily basis, and my family is no exception. We are definitely such technological enthusiasts that we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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use
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laptop
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often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 plays an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role in my home.

It is a black-colored You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 by the Lenovo brand, and my father This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it for me last year. I would say with it being portable, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it quite frequently
. In the morning, I open it to read the news, listen to music, and complete This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 homework. In the afternoon and evening, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
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some
 online classes or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 movies. Anyway, it depends on the day.

To be honest, this electronic device has aided me in a variety of ways, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the two main aspects are studying and entertaining myself. First
, you know, we are in the grip of the Coronavirus pandemic, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 our students can’t go to school and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 learn at home through This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 applications like Zoom or Google Meeting. Therefore
, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 has become valid more than ever, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I can attend online study classes with a large screen, a high-quality camera, and volume. Moreover
, with the Internet available on this device, I can search for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 websites and discover lots of information to finish my assignment and broaden my knowledge. Second, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 supports my study This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me amuse myself after a long period of learning. I am immersed
 in various genres of entertainment, from surfing the Internet, watching films, and playing games, to keeping in touch with my friends and relatives.

Finally
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of its benefits, I consider it to be a piece of disposable equipment in this civilized society. You need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 up with the times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the world is ever-evolving and computer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
. Once more, thanks to this top-notch device, I will preserve and utilize it wisely
. 