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Nowadays, being a teacher is a difficult profession. What are the advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays, being a teacher is a difficult profession. What are the advantages and disadvantages JLVow
This day, the most challenging profession is being a teacher such as a math teacher, an English teacher, a Russian teacher at school and college. On the contrary, being a teacher introduces a number of advantages and disadvantages which might be seen in the process of teaching. In this essay, pros and cons of being a teacher is going to be examined. Firstly, to be a teacher gives the chance of being creative and energy in their real life. For example, teaching allows them to be as inventive as they want with what they teach pupils and junior. They always try to prepare each lesson fun for their pupil and produce the knowledge they are cramming into pupils' brain stick. Thus, this can be an idea that might be supported. Secondly, being a teacher might have a number of demerits too. For instance, never-ending days, not only do they have scholar to deal with, on the contrary also students' parents, having summer off manufacture teachers feel depress and stress sometimes. Therefore, this can be a number of minuses that might be supported. In summary, being a teacher which is being a hard profession year by year gives more opportunities as well as having minuses. It is hoped that a number of benefits will be created for teachers in the foreseeable future.
This day, the most challenging profession is being a
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teacher
such as a math
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teacher
, an English
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teacher
, a Russian
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teacher
at school and college.
On the contrary
, being a
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teacher
introduces a
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number
of advantages and disadvantages which
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might
be
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seen
in the process of teaching. In this essay, pros and cons of being a
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teacher
is going to
be examined
.

Firstly
, to be a
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teacher
gives the chance of being creative and energy in their real life.
For example
, teaching
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allows
them to be as inventive as they want with what they teach pupils and junior. They always try to prepare each lesson fun for their pupil and produce the knowledge they are cramming into pupils' brain stick.
Thus
, this can be an
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idea
that
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might
be supported
.

Secondly
, being a
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teacher
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might
have a
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number
of demerits too.
For instance
, never-ending days, not
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only
do they have scholar to deal with,
on the contrary
also
students' parents, having summer off manufacture
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teachers
feel depress and
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stress
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sometimes
.
Therefore
, this can be a
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number
of minuses that
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might
be supported
.

In summary, being a
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teacher
which is being a
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hard
profession year by year gives more opportunities
as well
as having minuses. It
is hoped
that a
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number
of benefits will
be created
for
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teachers
in the foreseeable future.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, being a teacher is a difficult profession. What are the advantages and disadvantages

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
221 words
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