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Describe a person who has had a special effect in your life.

The person I would like to describe as someone who has had a specific influence on my life is my friend. About her appearance, I should say that she is in her late twenties, and she is a happy person who always has a beautiful smiling face. She has an average build, a fair complexion, and long straight brown hair. About her special qualities, since she never finds it difficult to be a successful person, she is less likely to fail. She is a very accomplished person with a sizeable number of achievements. Nevertheless, I've never seen that she brags about her successes. So she is humble and modest too. One of the great personality traits about her that I really look up to is that she never settles for second best. Actually, she tries her best to achieve goals. Besides owing to her trustworthy and reliable manner, I turn to her when I run into a problem. Consequently, I've learned a lot from her. I learned how to be positive even in difficult situations, and how to be kind and jolly.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 as someone who has had a specific influence on my life is my friend.

About her appearance, I should say that she is in her late twenties, and she is a happy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 who always has a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 smiling face.

She has an average build, a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
 complexion, and long straight brown hair.

About her special qualities, since she never finds it difficult to be a successful You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
, she is less likely to fail. She is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 accomplished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
 with a sizeable number of achievements. Nevertheless
, I've never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that she brags about her successes. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 she is humble and modest too.

One of the great personality traits about her that I really
 look up to is that she never settles for second best. Actually, she tries her best to achieve goals.

Besides
 owing to her trustworthy and reliable manner, I turn to her when I run into a problem.

Consequently
, I've learned a lot from her. I learned how to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 even in difficult situations, and how to be kind and jolly. 