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describe a person who has a lot of responsibilities

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I know many people around me who have a lot of responsibilities and most of them have a lot of stress too. I want to talk about one of my university professors who has a lot of duties on his shoulders. He is a Ph. D. holder and simultaneity teaches at two different universities, some institutes outside of the university. He is always monitoring and following his students and has some private classes at the weekend. I have seen him very close how he handles all these duties and I assume he must reduce some of his classes because it might damage his physical and mental health.
I know
many
people
around me who have
a lot of
responsibilities and most of them have
a lot of
stress
too. I want to talk about one of my university professors who
has
a lot of
duties on his shoulders. He is a
Ph. D.
holder and simultaneity teaches at two
different
universities,
some
institutes
outside of
the university. He is always monitoring and following his students and has
some
private classes
at the weekend
. I have
seen
him
very
close how he
handles
all these duties and I assume he
must
reduce
some
of his classes
because
it might damage his physical and mental health.
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IELTS essay describe a person who has a lot of responsibilities

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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5.0
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