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Describe a person who became your friend

Last year I visited summer camp. This place is such a nice opportunity to make acquaintance – so that’s what I did. Sophie was the only girl I shared my room with. The first thing that caught my eye was her long blond curly hair. Her appearance was quite unusual – big hazel eyes, aquiline nose and plump lips. At first she seemed a bit narcissistic because all she ever talked about was herself. But first impressions can be deceptive. So when I got to know her better, she turned out to be someone you could have a heart-to-heart talk with. Sophie is reliable, funny and witty. She’s also a very sociable and talkative person. The only thing that bothered me was her gullibility - she seemed to trust everyone she met and was willing to believe any story. She’s a nice person and I’m happy to have such friend.

Last year I visited summer camp. This place is such a nice opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 acquaintance Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that’s what I did.

Sophie was the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 girl I shared my room with. The first
 thing that caught my eye was her long blond curly hair. Her appearance was quite unusual Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 hazel eyes, aquiline nose and plump lips. At The comma is probably missing here: “first, she”.first, she
first she
 seemed a bit narcissistic This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 all she ever talked about was herself. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
first
 impressions can be deceptive. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 to know her better, she turned out to be someone you could have a heart-to-heart talk with. Sophie is reliable, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:amusinghumorous
funny
 and witty. She’s also
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 sociable and talkative person. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 thing that bothered me was her gullibility Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
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 she seemed to trust everyone she met and was willing to believe any story.

She’s a nice Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).person, and
person and
 I’m happy to have such friend. 