Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

there is no doubt computers have made education and learning much easier and myriad information as well as data are proffered by computers in no time. Though computers are perpetually used in education, they have not become the substitute of humans in classrooms. I tend to deem that we can expect profound change in teacher's role not their disappearance from classroom. first of all, acquisition of knowledge is easier with computers and they have been incessant tool in education. Computers have become one of the greatest sources of information. for instance, digital books and other academic material available on internet uphold students in manifold ways. Besides, computers have some educational software that stimulate students in study and have profound impacts on study. According to me internet has become the incredible and the most exquisite source of information and data for the students. As computers are becoming the common tool for teaching, teachers should be more scrupulous in their role. Moreover, A human interaction in classrooms encourages students to grasp intricate topics of digital material. Teachers can patronize the students in their study. A computer cannot emulate the expertise of teacher in how to explain complex topics to individual. Teachers should be guides instead of just translators, as computer is becoming common tool in learning.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.There
there
 is no doubt computers have made education and learning much easier and myriad information as well
 as data are proffered
 by computers in no time. Though computers are perpetually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in education, they have not become the substitute of humans in classrooms. I tend to deem that we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 profound This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in teacher's role not their disappearance from classroom. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.First
first
 of all, acquisition of knowledge is easier with Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).computers, and
computers and
 they have been incessant tool in education. Computers have become one of the greatest sources of information. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.For
for
 instance, digital books and other academic material available on internet uphold You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in manifold ways. Besides
, computers have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 educational software that stimulate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in study and have profound impacts on study. This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using “in my opinion” or “I think”.In my opinionI think
According to me
 internet has become the incredible and the most exquisite source of information and data for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
. As computers are becoming the common tool for teaching, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teachers
 should be more scrupulous in their role. Moreover
, A human interaction in classrooms encourages You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 to grasp intricate topics of digital material. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
Teachers
 can patronize the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 in their study. A computer cannot emulate the expertise of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
teacher
 in how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 complex topics to individual. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlecturersupervisorscholarassistantprofessortutor
Teachers
 should be guides instead
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 translators, as computer is becoming common tool in learning. 