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Describe a person that you are interested in . Who this person is,. How you know about this person,. What Sort of life they had before they become famous , how this person become famous.

Describe a person that you are interested in. Who this person is, . How you know about this person, . What Sort of life they had before they become famous, how this person become famous. EdgxL

There are number of people are famous like dancer writer speaker and so on but here I would like to talk about a minimum she was very intelligent and motivational speaker and she was born in march 1987 and 8 the age of 18 Shiva had faced many kind of problems in her life and and she was came about the personality and she had to stay in the hospital bed for entire to hear then she was moved to feel share that was her companion for the rest for her life

There are number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 like dancer writer speaker and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 here I would like to talk about a minimum she was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 intelligent and motivational Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).speaker, and
speaker and
 she was born
 in The month "March" needs to be capitalized.March
march
 1987 and 8 the age of 18 Shiva had faced Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: "many kinds".many kinds
many kind
 of problems in her life Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).and, and
and and
 she was Consider using a past participle here: "come".come
came
 about the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).personality, and
personality and
 she had to stay in the hospital bed for entire to hear then she was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to feel share that was her companion for the rest for her life