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Describe a person that you admire

Describe a person that you admire 6d0KK

One of the person that I would like to talk about it is who that was living in the eighteenth of century who called Thomas Alva Edison, he was one of the greatest inventors with more than 1000 inventions. I personally like him because of his determinations and during his time there was not enough equipments and scientists had limited. One the other hand, before there was not calculator or computer and he found light bulb and still people are using that. However, in my opinion the scientist are the most important factor for each society and we can learn by search a lot of things from them, it has been seen some scientist during their life had very low equipments but they helped the people and never gave up.

One of the person that I would like to talk about it is who that was living in the eighteenth of century who called Thomas Alva Edison, he was one of the greatest inventors with more than 1000 inventions. I personally
 like him This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of his determinations and during his time there was not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 equipments and scientists had limited. Did you mean "on"?On
One
 the other hand, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 there was not calculator or Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).computer, and
computer and
 he found light bulb and still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are using that. However
, in my opinion the scientist are the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 factor for each Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).society, and
society and
 we can learn by search This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 things from them, it has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 scientist during their life had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 low equipments This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and never gave up. 