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Advantages and disadvantages of hosting an international sporting event?

Advantages and disadvantages of hosting an international sporting event? Y2bJV
Some argue that hosting international sports events can be beneficial to countries. Hosting sports events could secure inflows of foreign capital, generate employment, and make people want to spend money. The Fifa World Cup that is going to be held in Doha during the summer of 2022 is expected to boost Qatar and its region’s economy. Billions of dollars are being invested in the infrastructure of the stadium, metro system, airport, and a seaport. This has led to an increase in employment for Qatar and its neighboring countries. Also, the greatest opportunities are expected to occur in the banking and construction sectors. It is creating a boosting confidence for investment because of its new dynamism towards the world cup.
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argue that hosting international sports
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can be beneficial to countries. Hosting sports
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events
could secure inflows of foreign capital, generate employment, and
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make
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people
want to spend money. The
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Fifa World Cup
that is
going to
be held
in Doha during the summer of 2022 is
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expected
to boost Qatar and its region’s economy. Billions of dollars are
being invested
in the infrastructure of the stadium, metro system, airport, and a seaport. This has led to an increase in employment for Qatar and its neighboring countries.
Also
, the greatest opportunities are
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expected
to occur in the banking and construction sectors. It is creating a boosting confidence for investment
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because
of its new dynamism towards the world cup.
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IELTS essay Advantages and disadvantages of hosting an international sporting event?

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