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Describe a person or people in a picture and use present continuous

Describe a person or people in a picture and use present continuous y782J
John and Wild live in London in England. They are teacher and they teach english in London secondary school. Today they are going to London Airport to preparing a long journey to Sydney in Australia to visit and discover new things. They are sitting in the middle of airport on the bench and reading brochure, beside them a women is reading newspaper. This is a long journey so they bring a big backpack and handbag.
John and Wild
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in London in England. They are
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
teacher and
they teach
Possible spelling mistake found.
english
in London secondary school.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
they are going to London Airport to preparing a long journey to Sydney in Australia to visit and discover new things. They are sitting in the middle of airport on the bench and reading brochure, beside them
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a woman" or simply "women"?
a women
is reading newspaper. This is a long journey
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
they bring a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
backpack and handbag.
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IELTS essay Describe a person or people in a picture and use present continuous

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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