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Describe a person in your family that you admire

Describe a person in your family that you admire 6NQ3B

Today, I am going to talk about a person whom I admire. I admire a man in my family from my teenage for his extraordinary qualities. He is my uncle, Looks like a Hollywood hero with a height of 6’1”. He loves me very much and is always with our family in both our happiness and sorrows. What I really like about this person is his politeness. You know, he is extremely well-behaved. He always treats people with respect. In addition, to be polite he is also very generous. he helps the poor, based on his ability, never ill-treats anyone, and always busy with his own activities. moreover, He is punctual and I have never seen him missing appointments. That's why I am really crazy about him and I like to spend time with him. Finally, why I fancy about him is the fact that he has sense of humor and he cracks me up in his live performances.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
, I am going to talk about a person whom I admire.

I admire a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 in my family from my teenage for his extraordinary qualities.

He is my uncle, Looks like a Hollywood hero with a height of 6’1”. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiresadores
loves
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much and is always with our family in both our happiness and sorrows.

What I really
 like about this person is his politeness.

You know, he is extremely
 well-behaved.

He always treats This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with respect.

In addition
, to be polite he is also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 generous.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHe
he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 the poor, based on his ability, never ill-treats anyone, and always busy with his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 activities.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMoreover
moreover
, He is punctual and I have never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 him missing appointments.

That's why I am really
 crazy about him and I like to spend time with him.

Finally
, why I fancy about him is the fact that he has sense of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).humor, and
humor and
 he cracks me up in his This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 performances. 