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Describe a person in your family that you admire

Describe a person in your family that you admire 6NQ3B
Today, I am going to talk about a person whom I admire. I admire a man in my family from my teenage for his extraordinary qualities. He is my uncle, Looks like a Hollywood hero with a height of 6’1”. He loves me very much and is always with our family in both our happiness and sorrows. What I really like about this person is his politeness. You know, he is extremely well-behaved. He always treats people with respect. In addition, to be polite he is also very generous. he helps the poor, based on his ability, never ill-treats anyone, and always busy with his own activities. moreover, He is punctual and I have never seen him missing appointments. That's why I am really crazy about him and I like to spend time with him. Finally, why I fancy about him is the fact that he has sense of humor and he cracks me up in his live performances.
Today
, I am going to talk about a person whom I admire.

I admire a
man
in my family from my teenage for his extraordinary qualities.

He is my uncle, Looks like a Hollywood hero with a height of 6’1”. He
loves
me
very
much and is always with our family in both our happiness and sorrows.

What I
really
like about this person is his politeness.

You know, he is
extremely
well-behaved.

He always treats
people
with respect.

In addition
, to be polite he is
also
very
generous.

he
helps
the poor, based on his ability, never ill-treats anyone, and always busy with his
own
activities.

moreover
, He is punctual and I have never
seen
him missing appointments.

That's why I am
really
crazy about him and I like to spend time with him.

Finally
, why I fancy about him is the fact that he has sense of
humor and
he cracks me up in his
live
performances.
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IELTS essay Describe a person in your family that you admire

Essay
  American English
11 paragraphs
159 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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