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Describe a news story that you have read or saw

Describe a news story that you have read or saw BYo0w
At the moment, we have to lock down because of covid 19. So when I have meal, I habitually watch the news on TV. Although the corona virus attacks us which makes us in worse situation, there's still a lot of volunteers help us unconditionally. We know that in Ho Chi Minh city, the situation is extremly complicated. The infected case are increasing dramatically, they're hunger, poor and don't have any money to buy food or stuffs because of corona virus. But the goverment never leaves them. There're many officers and soldiers bring food for each one, for sure that no one left behind. Also the citizens do the charity, sell free food. . . These acts shoud be shared more on the media, it's so precious! Because the infected case are rising and we don't want to observe anyone pass away because of covid 19. Anytime I see this news, I am moving and always thankful to anyone who attend to fight for the pandemic. So this news will ease the citizens, share the positive mood and bring faith in overcoming the pandemic. We should stay at home and follow 5K message for a better society without corona virus.
At the moment, we
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have to
lock down
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because
of
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covid 19
.
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So
when I have meal, I
habitually
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watch
the news on TV. Although the
The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
corona virus
attacks us which
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makes
us in worse situation, there's
still
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a lot of
volunteers
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help
us
unconditionally
.

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Ho Chi Minh city
, the situation is
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extremly
complicated. The infected case are increasing
dramatically
, they're hunger, poor and don't have any money to
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buy
food or stuffs
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because
of
The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
corona virus
.
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But
the
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goverment
never
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leaves
them. There're
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many
officers and soldiers bring food for each one, for sure that no one
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left
behind.
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Also
the citizens do the charity, sell free food.
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.
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.
These acts
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shoud
be shared
more on the media, it's
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so
precious!

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Because
the infected case are
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rising and
we don't want to observe anyone pass away
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
. Anytime I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
this news, I am moving and always thankful to anyone who attend to fight for the pandemic.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
this news will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
the citizens, share the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
mood and bring faith in overcoming the pandemic. We should stay at home and follow 5K message for a better society without
The term "coronavirus" (= disease) is spelled as one word.
corona virus
.
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IELTS essay Describe a news story that you have read or saw

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
200 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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