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Please brief the fact of this case in English in no more than six sentences.

Please brief the fact of this case in English in no more than six sentences. JKpeD
A plaintiff who signs an indefinite term labor contract with the company. In 2015, the legal representative of the company made an official document with a plaintiff allowing her to work officially in France and if a plaintiff wanted to move back to work in Vietnam, she must notify 6 months in advance. In 2018, a dependent who is the new legal representative of the company unilaterally terminated the labor contract with on the grounds that a plaintiff was not regularly present at the company. The plaintiff sued the court to force the company to restore work according to the labor contract and pay wages in accordance with the law and signed agreements.
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plaintiff
who signs an indefinite term labor contract with the
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company
. In 2015, the legal representative of the
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company
made an official document with a
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plaintiff
allowing her to work
officially
in France and if a
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plaintiff
wanted to
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move
back to work in Vietnam, she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
notify 6 months in advance. In 2018, a dependent who is the new legal representative of the
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company
unilaterally
terminated the labor contract with on the grounds that a
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plaintiff
was not
regularly
present at the
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company
. The
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plaintiff
sued the court to force the
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company
to restore work according to the labor contract and pay wages in accordance with the law and signed agreements.
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IELTS essay Please brief the fact of this case in English in no more than six sentences.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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