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Describe a beautiful place to visit in your country

Describe a beautiful place to visit in your country 7WO2y
There are a lot of beatiful place in my country. One of them that i would recomened to you is HA Long Bay. HA Long Bay is an UNESCO World Heritage Site and popular travel destination in Quang Ning Province, Viet Nam. You can get the by car in 35 min if you stay at Quang Ning. If you stay at Ha Noi you can get there on national highway 5 and it will take you about 3 hours. Ha Long Bay have a lot of intersing things to visit so if you want to visit all of them it might take 3 to 5 days to visit. Firstly you can go to the beach. Secondly you can visit some islands in the like fighting Cock Island, . . . Thirdly you can visit some popular caves it is Sung Sot cave, Da Go cave, Me Cung cave. Fouthly you can visit night street. In night Ha Long Bay have a lot intersing things to do. Finally I can go shopping at Cat Ba Island Market. I recomend this place becasure beacuse it is a beatiful, popular and interesting place to visit in viet nam
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IELTS essay Describe a beautiful place to visit in your country

Essay
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