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• Describe a new public place/building you would like to visit. You should say: where it is what it is like how you knew this place and explain why you would like to visit it.

• Describe a new public place/building you would like to visit. You should say: where it is what it is like how you knew this place and explain why you would like to visit it. YkLdB
Today, I will tell you about a new public building that I would like to visit. That place is called Van Hanh Mall. To my knowledge, it is a commercial center, which is located at 11 Su Van Hanh, Ward 12, District 10. I knew this place 2 years ago when my father & mother took me and my sibling to go there for entertaining in my birthday occasion. This building contains 8 floors, from the basement to the 7th floor. Its basement has some elevators, and escalators, consequently, visitors can go up to the other floors. Since I haven’t visited all of the floors, I would tell you some grounds that I have explored. The 1st and 2nd floor contains fashion products include: shoes, handbags, accessories, cosmetics products for fans of fashion. Up to the 3rd floor, there is a bookstore called Phuong Nam bookstore, I always enjoy reading my favorite kinds of books, such as mathematics, and science when I come back to this place. This floor also has some toy shops, which sell original toys which come from their manufactured country, for instance: Toyphere, Momotarou, etc. for fans of toys’ brand. On the 5th floor, there are various restaurants that serve buffets, drinks, and fast foods, such as Thai Express, Hoang Yen Buffet, Hikohasu Sushi, etc. . . At these restaurants, we enjoy lots of delicious food and drinks, such as sushi, pizza, and milk teas. I’m really excited to go to Van Hanh Mall because I can relax after working and learning, on the other hand, I can enjoy cheerful moments with my beloved family.
Today
, I will
tell
you about a new public building that I would like to visit. That place
is called
Van
Hanh
Mall. To my knowledge, it is a commercial center, which
is located
at 11
Su
Van
Hanh
, Ward 12, District 10. I knew this place 2 years ago when my father & mother took me and my sibling to go there for entertaining
in my birthday
occasion.

This building contains 8
floors
, from the basement to the 7th
floor
. Its basement has
some
elevators, and escalators,
consequently
, visitors can go up to the other
floors
. Since I haven’t visited
all of the
floors
, I would
tell
you
some
grounds that I have explored. The 1st and 2nd
floor
contains fashion products include: shoes, handbags, accessories, cosmetics products for fans of fashion. Up to the 3rd
floor
, there is a bookstore called
Phuong
Nam bookstore, I always enjoy reading my favorite kinds of books, such as mathematics, and science when I
come
back to this place. This
floor
also
has
some
toy shops, which sell original toys which
come
from their manufactured country,
for instance
:
Toyphere
,
Momotarou
, etc. for fans of toys’ brand. On the 5th
floor
, there are various restaurants that serve buffets, drinks, and
fast
foods, such as Thai Express,
Hoang
Yen Buffet,
Hikohasu
Sushi, etc.
.
.
At these restaurants, we enjoy lots of delicious food and drinks, such as sushi, pizza, and milk teas.

I’m
really
excited to go to Van
Hanh
Mall
because
I can relax after working and learning,
on the other hand
, I can enjoy cheerful moments with my beloved family.
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IELTS essay • Describe a new public place/building you would like to visit. You should say: where it is what it is like how you knew this place and explain why you would like to visit it.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
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