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A funny time in my family

A funny time in my family K0wVM

. . . . . A funny time in my family. . . My family consist of 5 members. It includes my father, mother, two little brothers and me. Me and my brother's love our dad and mom so much. They took good care of us. Every morning and night we used to have our breakfast and dinner together. I want to tell you about a place where I visited today with my family. We went to Turkish restaurant called "Kebab" for dinner. It situated in the centre of the city, so you can see wonderful view of city from window. Every waiter in the restaurant is Turkish, so I felt myself like I was having lunch in Istanbul. I have never ate Turkish food before, At first it looks like a tasteless dish, but after I tasted it, I really liked it. The restaurant manager gave us two fruit juices for free because he was my dad’s partner in his career. I really liked the atmosphere of this restaurant. I can recommend it everyone to have lunch at this restaurant without any doubt.

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