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Describe a memorable holiday you have had.

Describe a memorable holiday you have had. 9Yrxj

Last summer, I had a wonderful vacation in SaPa with my family. We went there by car and on the way, I could not stop looking at the sight around me. Unlike many places, Sapa’s weather was still chilly in the summer. The air was cool and fresh, making me feel very comfortable. We have experiences at the top of Mount Fansipan, Ham Rong mountain, to the Muong Hoa valley, and we visited the caves and waterfall in Coc San. Besides, I also had a chance to try local food such as Sapa Cap Nach Pork, bamboo sticky rice, Tao Meo Wine… This was my first vacation with my family and we had many memories. I hope that with the current COVID situation, it will be over soon so that next vacation my family and I will go to many other places.

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 with my family. We went there by car and on the way, I could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 looking at Consider using "the surrounding sight".the surrounding sight
the sight around me
.

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very
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 we had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 memories. I hope that with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
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soon
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so
 that next
 vacation my family and I will go to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 other places. 