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describe a meal that you had

describe a meal that you had 33xd

The most memorable meal that I had ever had was on my father’s birthday party. On that day, my family had received another happy news that I had been admitted into university. My father invited many relatives and his friends. The party was so joyful. After cutting the cake, my family had taken photos together. Everyone wished my father and congratulated me. Then, we have lunch. My mother prepared a lot of my favorite food. Firstly, my mom gave us seafood salad and crab soup, which was very yummy. My aunt cooked noodle, grilled beef and hotpot. Anyway, we all enjoyed this meal so much. That meal made me imagine my future university’s life when I need to live away my hometown, my parents, I would get used to the instant meals. My mood went down.

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meal
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was
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 relatives and his friends. The party was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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a lot of
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very
 yummy. My aunt cooked noodle, grilled beef and hotpot. Anyway, we all enjoyed this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfaresnackpicnicdessertfeastrefreshment
meal
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so
 much. That You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfaresnackpicnicdessertfeastrefreshment
meal
 made me imagine my future university’s life when I need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 away my hometown, my parents, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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 to the instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfaresnackpicnicdessertfeastrefreshment
meals
. My mood went down. 