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Describe a language that you are studying, other than your first language.

Describe a language that you are studying, other than your first language. GLlWg
English is an international language and it is used to communicate all over the world. That’s why I have chosen English as my second language. The first time I learned English was in 3rd grade. However, I studied it methodically in the 12th grade. Now, I can communicate with other people in English basically but because of my dialect, my pronunciations are very bad. I am trying to improve them by watching many videos in English and practice. Besides, although my grammars are pretty good, it’s too hard to apply them to my speech. I hope that after 2 years I can speak and listen to English frequently. And now I’m a student so English is very necessary for me in all things. For example, If I want to graduate from university, I need to IELTS overall 4. 5 or if I want a good job in a multinational company, I need to communicate in English frequently. Especially, I am a person who loves to travel abroad. I have to have English to use when I want to book a hotel room, buy food or move to the place I want. Moreover, English gives me rich knowledge. As I know, having more than 55% of websites are written in English. Therefore, I can search for a lot of information by typing keywords in English. In conclusion, I think English is key for the future of youngsters. This is a language that everyone should learn.
English is an international language and it is
used
to communicate all over the world. That’s why I have chosen English as my second language.

The
first
time I learned English was in 3rd grade.
However
, I studied it
methodically
in the 12th grade.
Now
, I can communicate with other
people
in English
basically
but
because
of my dialect, my pronunciations are
very
bad
. I am trying to
improve
them by watching
many
videos in English and practice.
Besides
, although my grammars are pretty
good
, it’s too
hard
to apply them to my speech. I hope that after 2 years I can speak and listen to English
frequently
.

And
now
I’m a student
so
English is
very
necessary for me in all things.
For example
, If I
want
to graduate from university, I need to IELTS
overall
4. 5 or if I
want
a
good
job in a multinational
company
, I need to communicate in English
frequently
.
Especially
, I am a person who
loves
to travel abroad. I
have to
have English to
use
when I
want
to book a hotel room,
buy
food or
move
to the place I
want
.
Moreover
, English gives me rich knowledge. As I know, having more than 55% of websites
are written
in English.
Therefore
, I can search for
a lot of
information by typing keywords in English.

In conclusion
, I
think
English is key for the future of youngsters. This is a language that everyone should learn.
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IELTS essay Describe a language that you are studying, other than your first language.

Essay
  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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