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he typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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It is no doubt, Technology has been flourishing in all the world in at all cost. No one deniable this latest facilities. While, some people credence that the stereotypical learning systems will be changing automatically in educator and pupil in predict years. I partiality concur and oppose with had given statement. To begin, with rapdilly progress in technology, It is undeniable for instance, during covid-19 pandemics then all world had lockdown. Most of children got study on the online classes so that, people thoughts that it could benefices to learners and counsellors. exactelly, it would give positive effects for future studies. On the contrary, machinary will put bad effect on human health like as will get obesity, less active, eyesight weeks, less talk may be more shy even they will talk with front of people. In oppose, online classes in future. It would improve ecological system like as drastically decrease traffic congestion. It can improve to environment pollution in coming years. on the other hand, For example, in ancient times, king children had admitted to the Guru house for study as well as some manners. Then they stayed at guru house. Therethey learned a lot of rights or laws. So that education system drastically changes as compares now. So similar, some changes can comes in next years. but old study betters as compare. Moreover, now children learn many things like, punctual, loyalty, humanity, give or take respect, make good bond in friend circle and so on. In online class they dis not learn those things. they individual learn, may be it not better typical teaching with electronic gadgets. To end point, over using always causing to human so i think Machinery study is better for gaining knowledge. but, school system is not changing along technique in predict.
It is no doubt, Technology has been flourishing in all the world in at all cost. No one deniable this latest facilities. While,
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some
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people
credence that the stereotypical learning
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systems
will be changing
automatically
in educator and pupil in predict years.
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'I'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
I partiality
concur and oppose with had
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given
statement.

To
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begin
, with
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rapdilly
progress in technology, It is undeniable
for instance
, during
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
pandemics then all world had lockdown.
After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ("Most of the children") or simply say "Most children".
Most of children
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got
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study
on the online classes
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so
that,
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people
thoughts that it
The word 'benefices' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
could benefices
to learners and
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counsellors
.
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exactelly
, it would give
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positive
effects for future
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studies
.
On the contrary
,
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machinary
will put
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bad
effect on human health like as will
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get
obesity, less active, eyesight weeks, less talk may be more shy even they will talk with front of
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people
. In oppose, online classes
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in future
. It would
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improve
ecological
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system
like as
drastically
decrease traffic congestion. It can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
to environment pollution in coming years.

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on
the other hand,
For example
, in ancient times, king children had admitted to the Guru
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house
for
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study
as well
as
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some
manners. Then they stayed at guru
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house
.
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Therethey
learned
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a lot of
rights or laws.
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So
that education
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system
drastically
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changes
as compares
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now
.
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So
similar,
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some
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changes
can
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comes
in
next
years.
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but
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old
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study
betters as compare.
Moreover
,
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now
children learn
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many
things like, punctual, loyalty, humanity, give or take respect,
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make
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good
bond in friend circle and
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so
on. In online
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class
they
Did you mean "this"?
dis
not learn those things.
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they
individual learn,
Did you mean "maybe" (= perhaps)?
may be
it not better typical teaching with electronic gadgets.

To
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end
point, over using always causing to human
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so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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think
Machinery
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
is better for gaining knowledge.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
but
, school
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
system
is not changing along technique in predict.
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IELTS essay he typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
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