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A glance at the given pictures illustrate the developments of rural area named Lakeside over a decade. Overall, it is apparent that significant alterations were experienced in the Lakeside village in the 2000-2009 timeframe.

A glance at the given pictures illustrate the developments of rural area named Lakeside over a decade. Overall, it is apparent that significant alterations were experienced in the Lakeside village in the 2000-2009 timeframe. Specifically, the most notable change was the expansion of the industrial complex. To begin with, a replacement of Derelic warehouse by the carpark was witnessed in the North of Lakeview. Moving on, the Old town, which was located across from Derelic warehouse, was demolished so as to establish both offices and the university. While the residential area, school and the river remain unchanged, the left-hand of the river saw a renovation of the art center by the state-of-the-art cinema. The residential area, which was in close proximity to the art center, was also replaced by the new shopping center. In the South-East of the village, the original residential area was knocked down in order to expanded the industrial complex area. Eventually, a lake, which was paralleled to the industrial complex, was wrecked to form a pond.

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given
 pictures illustrate the developments of rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 named Lakeside over a decade.

Overall
, it is apparent that significant alterations were experienced
 in the Lakeside village in the 2000-2009 timeframe. Specifically
, the most notable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 was the expansion of the industrial complex.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, a replacement of Possible spelling mistake found.DerelictGarlic
Derelic
 warehouse by the Possible spelling mistake found.car parkcarp ark
carpark
was witnessed
 in the North of Possible spelling mistake found.Lake view
Lakeview
. Moving on, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
Old
 town, which was located
 across from Possible spelling mistake found.DerelictGarlic
Derelic
 warehouse, was demolished
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
 establish both offices and the university. While the residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, school and the river remain unchanged, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand of the river This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a renovation of the art center by the state-of-the-art cinema. The residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, which was in Consider using "proximity".proximity
close proximity
 to the art center, was also
 replaced by the new shopping center.

In the South-East of the village, the original residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
was knocked
 down in order Did you mean "to expand"?to expand
to expanded
 the industrial complex You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Eventually
, a lake, which was paralleled
 to the industrial complex, was wrecked
 to form a pond. 