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Describe a job that you did in the past

Describe a job that you did in the past 8Jwmw
Main responsibility: - Giving information about the course to the customer. - Scheduling an appointment and testing skills for the new student. - Doing customer care activities and lunch the survey to figure out the insight for the marketing team. - Managing posts on Facebook. Recognition and gains: - Experience in customer persuasion skills, working in a team and having an understanding of the customer care process - The biggest lesson I learned through this job is how to handle a media crisis and the importance of customer in a firm. - I have achieved the following achievements while working in this position including a consulting success rate of more than 85%, contributing to completing the customer care process.
Main responsibility:

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Giving information about the course to the customer.

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Scheduling an appointment and testing
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skills
for the new student.

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Doing
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customer
care activities and lunch the survey to figure out the insight for the marketing team.

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Managing posts on Facebook.

Recognition and gains:

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Experience in
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customer
persuasion
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skills
, working in a team and having an understanding of the
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customer
care process

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The biggest lesson I learned through this job is how to handle a media crisis and the importance of
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customer
in a firm.

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I have achieved the following achievements while working in this position including a consulting success rate of more than 85%, contributing to completing the
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customer
care process.

IELTS essay Describe a job that you did in the past

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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