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Describe a house you visited that caught your attention

Describe a house you visited that caught your attention ApEq1
Living in a house is a new trend not only in my country but also all over the world. Today I would like to talk about a house which is very beautiful and pay attention me. Every person has a dream they would have a own home. last 5 years, my cousin bought a new apartment. It was very nice with all facilities. She invited me on lunch. I visited her home. There were all amenities in her house. It was a big garden and that garden was different type of flowers were blooming. Furthermore, it had one garage. Apart from that, this house was 5bedrooms and attached bathrooms. There was wooden furniture. Furniture was expensive and modern. There was amazing sofa set in drawing room. All rooms were big and cozy. Nevertheless, it was a swimming pool. I enjoyed very much. So, that was a home which attracts me. I like to my dream house which I would like go to build in the future. Whenever I get a chance to live there, definitely I will go there.
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and pay attention me. Every person has a dream they would have
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a new apartment. It was
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nice with all facilities. She invited me on lunch. I visited her home. There were all amenities in her
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. It was a
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garden and that garden was
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type of flowers were blooming.
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, it had one garage. Apart from that, this
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house
was 5bedrooms and attached bathrooms. There was wooden furniture. Furniture was expensive and modern. There was amazing sofa set in drawing room. All rooms were
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big
and cozy.
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much.
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which I would like go to build in the future. Whenever I
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there, definitely I will go there.
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IELTS essay Describe a house you visited that caught your attention

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
179 words
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