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Describe a good or a bad learning you have had.

Describe a good or a bad learning you have had. 1AxYG
Although I have had many positive experiences in learning, I have few bad ones. I wanted to immigrate that is why I decided to take a course at IELTS to be able to have the band score. Recently did I take a preparation course for IELTS. It was the worst course I have had owing to the instructor. The instructor did not a helpful person, talked about her life and how she progress all the time. In addition, the tutor did not give attention to the level of every student or encourage us. She was busy therefore she was not correct any assignment nor give her feedback. I finished this course without any progress and I am struggling at the same band I have from the beginning of the course until the end. I talked to the manager and told him my complaint but without any result. I am struggling and did have not any hope that I could reach my desired band score. A positive learning experience was after finishing this awful course and taking another private to emulate my writing skills. I am satisfied with this one. The trainer encourages and gives her feedback after every session. Moreover, we have numerous assignments. Secondly, she teaches grammar that aids to having a 7+ score in the writing. Although I did not book the exam, I felt the progress in my score. Teaching like friends makes huge progress. Moreover, positive words always encourage students that they could have what they dream of it.
Although I have had
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many
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positive
experiences in learning, I have few
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bad
ones.

I wanted to immigrate
that is
why I decided to take a
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course
at IELTS to be able to have the band score. Recently did I take a preparation
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course
for IELTS. It was the worst
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course
I have had owing to the instructor. The instructor did not a helpful person, talked about her life and how she
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progress
all the time.
In addition
, the tutor did not give attention to the level of every student or encourage us. She was busy
therefore
she was not correct any assignment nor give her feedback. I finished this
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course
without any
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progress and
I am struggling at the same band I have from the beginning of the
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course
until the
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end
. I talked to the manager and
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told
him my complaint
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but
without any result.
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I
am struggling and did have not any hope that I could reach my desired band score.

A
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positive
learning experience was after finishing this awful
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course
and taking another private to emulate my writing
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skills
. I
am satisfied
with this one. The trainer encourages and gives her feedback after every session.
Moreover
, we have numerous assignments.
Secondly
, she teaches grammar that aids to having a 7+ score in the writing. Although I did not book the exam, I felt the
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progress
in my score.

Teaching like friends
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makes
huge
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progress
.
Moreover
,
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positive
words always encourage students that they could have what they dream of it.
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IELTS essay Describe a good or a bad learning you have had.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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