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Article wanted for our new page on family life

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Family and love are two essential facets to being happy and sometimes are enough. Family and love complement each other, because with your family you'll have eternal love, and the mother's love is ones of the most beautiful loves that exist. Brother's love is more complicated, moreover in childhood, because all are fights with your brother, like I suffered with my old and only brother. But, when both of us growed up, it changes because of the mature. In spite of all our fighting childhood, actually we are good brothers who help each other, and that's the beauty of the brother's love. One of the advantages of being the youngest girl in the family is the unconditional love that have my mother for me and that makes me very happy, I don't really need more than that. I think that I don't have any important disadvantage, but If I have to say something bad of my place in the family, I mention the overprotection of my dad over me, because like he says, I always will be his baby, and is often stressfull for me. I always wish be the middle child of my family, I don't know why, but I think you aren't the protectos of your younger siblings because that role is for the oldest brother nor you aren't the baby of the family who is the youngest sibling.
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are two essential facets to being happy and
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sometimes
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and
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complement each other,
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with your
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family
you'll have eternal
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love
, and the mother's
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love
is ones of the most
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beautiful
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loves
that exist. Brother's
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love
is more complicated,
moreover
in childhood,
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because
all are fights with your
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brother
, like I suffered with my
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old
and
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only
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brother
.
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, when both of us
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growed
up, it
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changes
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because
of the mature.
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all our fighting childhood, actually we are
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good
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brothers
who
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help
each other, and that's the beauty of the brother's
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love
. One of the advantages of being the youngest girl in the
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family
is the unconditional
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love
that have my mother for me and that
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makes
me
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very
happy, I don't
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disadvantage,
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say something
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bad
of my place in the
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, I mention the
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overprotection
of my dad over me,
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because
like he says, I always will be his baby, and is
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often
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stressfull
for me.

I always wish be the middle child of my
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family
, I don't know why,
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but
I
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think
you aren't the
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protectos
of your younger siblings
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because
that role is for the oldest
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brother
nor you aren't the baby of the
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family
who is the youngest sibling.
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IELTS essay Article wanted for our new page on family life

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
231 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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