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describe a family member that you get on well with you should mention

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I am very grateful to have such a supportive and caring family. Who are always there for me no matter what. We are five members of my family. We, five members, live in one house apart from it. I have a few uncles, aunts, and a cousin. i would like to talk about one of my closest family member. His name is amrit. We both are very close to each other. I am sharing with them all my good and bad experience. If we get in any trouble then we take help of each other.
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grateful to have such a supportive and caring family. Who are always there for me no matter what. We are five members of my family. We, five members,
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live
in one
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apart from it. I have a few uncles, aunts, and a cousin.
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would like to talk about one of my closest family member. His name is
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amrit
. We both are
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very
close to each other. I am sharing with them all my
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good
and
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bad
experience. If we
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get
in any trouble then we take
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help
of each other.
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IELTS essay describe a family member that you get on well with you should mention

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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