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Describe a country that you would like to go to

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When I have lots of money and time, I want to travel around the world. One of my favorite countries is Japan. Japan is located in Asia. This country is famous for many things, like Phu Si Mountain, amazing food, peach blossoms, movies, . . . I am attracted by the luxurious design of Tokyo Tower. I heard that from the observation deck, anyone could see the entire city. I often think about the sheer beauty of the wide-green fields and snow-capped mountains. I have heard about exciting experiences in the countryside and experimenting with different cuisines. I think it will be a great trip for me in the future, so I really want to go there.
When I have lots of money and time, I want to travel around the world. One of my favorite countries is Japan.

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IELTS essay Describe a country that you would like to go to

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
117 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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