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About India present situation.

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India is a cow. India and cow like a same. Cow have a four leg also India have a four leg, Delhi, Mumbai, Kolkata, Chennai. Cow has a one tail. India has Kanyakumari. Cow has two sing India has a two sing, Manmohan Singh and Yuvraj Singh. Cow has two eyes, India has also two eye, Jamna eye and Jija eye. Cow is our mother, India is also our mother Bharat Mata. dhhvjkgjkkkkkkjbbbbbbbbhnbdrhkmvfhkkcxyokbxawuknnvgfghjkjjkjkklookjfesfhjkiokkvxsdt
India is a
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cow
. India and
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cow
like a same.
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Cow
have a four leg
also
India
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have
a four leg, Delhi, Mumbai, Kolkata, Chennai.
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Cow
has a one tail. India has
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Kanyakumari
.
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Cow
has two sing India has a two sing,
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Manmohan
Singh and
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Yuvraj
Singh.
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Cow
has two
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eyes
, India has
also
two
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eye
,
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Jamna
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eye
and
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Jija
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eye
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Cow
is our mother, India is
also
our mother Bharat
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Mata
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IELTS essay About India present situation.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
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