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Describe a country or state that you have lived in or visited

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I have lived in Viet Nam for ages. It is next to Laos, Cambodia, China. It is also near Est sea. The main city in Viet Nam in Ha Noi. There are four seasons in the north. Summer from June to August, Winter from November to December. But in the South, there are only two seasons. The dry season is from November to April, the rainy season is from May to November. Tourists often are attracted by the place where they visit. They also are attracted by the food they try. People in Viet Nam speak Vietnamese. There are more than 97 million people. People here are very friendly and generous.
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IELTS essay Describe a country or state that you have lived in or visited

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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