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describe a change in your life

describe a change in your life PrWY2

I have started working out and trying to live a healthier life and have a better life style. I did it because I wanted to be in a better physical and mental state for example, I wanted to be in a more suitable shape and I wanted to get rid of life stresses which I think it helps a lot to maintain your mental health. Furthermore, I did it by my own, and nobody encouraged me in changing my life style apart from my fitness couch who I pay to help so that does not count actually. Considering everything, I think I executed a remarkable job because I had never maintained to working out this much and I am indeed delighted about it and now I have not merely a fitter body but also, I have more self-esteem now. Honestly, despite the fact that I did not follow my diet recently and I fell back a lot yet I believe I was successful in it.

I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 working out and trying to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a healthier You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 and have a better You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 style. I did it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I wanted to be in a better physical and mental state for example
, I wanted to be in a more suitable shape and I wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 rid of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuates
stresses
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 a lot to maintain your mental health.

Furthermore
, I did it by my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
, and nobody encouraged me in changing my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 style apart from my fitness couch who I pay to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that does not count actually.

Considering everything, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I executed a remarkable job This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I had never maintained to working out this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).much, and
much and
 I am indeed
 delighted about it and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I have not merely
 a fitter body This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
, I have more self-esteem This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Honestly
, despite the fact that I did not follow my diet recently and I fell back a lot yet
 I believe I was successful in it. 