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Describe a cafe you went to.

Describe a cafe you went to. 25j7X
My favourite one of Highland Coffee. It is a coffee shop near my house. It is a place where I can meet and have conversations with my fiends. Every weekend when I hang out with my fiends. The menu here not only has traditional coffee but also many kinds of tea such as: peach tea, yellow lotus tea. . . Moreover, there are also many kinds of bread and cakes such as: tiramisu, cheese coffee. . . The service style here is very professional. The staff here are very polite and attentive. In particular, the space is quite cozy and branded. Easy to recognize through the familiar dominant red tone. Luxurious interior is both classic and modern, bringing relaxation to customers. This is the perfect place to study, work, chat with friends and family. Highland Coffee is always my first choice.
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one of Highland
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shop near my
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meet
and have conversations with my fiends. Every weekend when I hang out with my fiends. The menu here not
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has traditional
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coffee
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also
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kinds of tea such as: peach tea, yellow lotus tea.
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many
kinds of bread and cakes such as: tiramisu, cheese
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coffee
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The service style here is
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professional. The staff here are
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polite and attentive.
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, the space is quite cozy and branded. Easy to recognize through the familiar dominant red tone. Luxurious interior is both classic and modern, bringing relaxation to customers. This is the perfect place to study, work, chat with friends and family. Highland
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IELTS essay Describe a cafe you went to.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
141 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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