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Describe your favorite present you have received.

Describe your favorite present you have received. nR03n

The most favorite present I have received is a ball that my father gave for me at my tenth birthday. It is normal football ball but for me it is important because it is the first gift I am given by my father. My ball is the smalllest of the sizes. That ball is blue, its shell is made of leather, including thirty-two hexagons. I usually play it with my friend in the afternoon after stressful school hours. Now it isn't new so I put it carefully in my bedroom. Whenever I see it, I always remember my dad.

The most favorite present I have received is a ball that my father gave for me at my tenth birthday. It is normal football ball This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 for me it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is the first
 gift I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by my father. My ball is the Possible spelling mistake found.smallestsmall lest
smalllest
 of the sizes. That ball is blue, its shell is made
 of leather, including thirty-two hexagons. I usually
 play it with my friend in the afternoon after stressful school hours. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 it isn't new This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I put it carefully
 in my bedroom. Whenever I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 it, I always remember my dad. 