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Waste management is more challange in our country.write your opinion and how to solve it.

Waste management is more challange in our country. write your opinion and how to solve it. Pg6O2
Nowadays, more than tons of waste have been being produced which from home everyday and some people claim that not enough of the litters is recycle. Therefore, they think govorment could have a policy to increase recycling. It is neccessary to say that theire government should take action. For example, providing rubbish bag into each family sothat seperate a littar and it to have value. Many wate, paper, book or steel from home can sale to government or decrese council taskEither government should provide junk bank that the citizen can deposit recycle wast and inverse to be some money. Moreover, government should have spot advertisement on telivision to motivate advantage of recycling. In thiland, my country we have 3R advertisement standing. For reuse, reduce and easy example way to do in house such as using less plastics bag, reuse take away sale some paper.
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IELTS essay Waste management is more challange in our country. write your opinion and how to solve it.

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