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Describe a book you are readingYou should saywhat the book is aboutwhen you read ithow long you have been reading it forand explain what you like about the book v.1

Describe a book you are readingYou should saywhat the book is aboutwhen you read ithow long you have been reading it forand explain what you like about the book v. 1
Every generation, what most people feel proud is giving a birth, baby is a sort of gift that we receive it from our favourite god. But in the 20th centurary, most parents are trying to foeticide their baby due to various issues such as financial burdens, fear of bringing up the infant, some unlisted reason too. Some people stand likely to approach the side of abortion is a legal in our nation, although some against of this act and mentioned it's an illegal and an offence. So, the following paragraphs will discuss both views comprehensively. A decade years back, foeticide is the kind of offence and illegal activity which was not encouraged by the government or any related hospital. But, now the current trend has completely changed with the modern era. An abortion is becoming a very controversial issue to the society because the government has given permission to the parents who wants to make abortion and it's moderately legal now and has to follow certain rules and regulation to list the reason. To illustrate with an example, the abortion rate has become acute in recent days due to the parents' plausible explanation such as not ready for raising a child, at the same time, India is facing more than en number of abortion cases which is now equivalent to divorce cases. Instead of making abortion, if any parents don't want to have a baby, they have to take a precaution before they step in enjoyment. So, it could prevent to curb these sorts of problems without having it. Although it's kind of legal it's offence too. Because they are virtually killing an unborn infant without the baby consent. Whatever the situation may be, the parents' don't have rights to kill the baby for their beneficial purpose. Although giving a reasonable explanation is an excuse, sometimes it causes considerable adverse impacts among family. For instance, last year, my cousin's wife was pregnant and due to financial burden and misunderstanding between family, they had decided to abort the baby and still now they are facing the consequences of not having the infant and that destroy the bonding relationship among lovers. In conclusion, what I believed is, abortion is moderately legal in my country and also is still increasing, despite having negative impacts I think instead of encouraging we should recommend certain procedures to curb the problems with some restriction and proper instruction. If the government announced duly about the abortion is an illegal one, then it will become more positive impacts on society.
Every generation, what most
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feel proud is giving a birth, baby is a sort of gift that we receive it from our
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favourite
god.
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But
in the 20th
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centurary
, most parents are trying to
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foeticide
their baby due to various issues such as financial burdens, fear of bringing up the infant,
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some
unlisted reason too.
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people
stand likely to approach the side of
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abortion
is a
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legal
in our nation, although
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some
against of this act and mentioned
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it's
an illegal and an
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offence
.
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So
, the following paragraphs will discuss both views
comprehensively
.

A decade years back,
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foeticide
is the kind of
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offence
and illegal activity which was not encouraged by the
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government
or any related hospital.
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But
,
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now
the
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current
trend has completely
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changed
with the modern era. An
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abortion
is becoming a
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very
controversial issue to the society
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because
the
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government
has
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given
permission to the parents who
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wants
to
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make
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abortion
and
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it's
moderately
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legal
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now
and
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has to
follow certain
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rules
and regulation to list the reason. To illustrate with an example, the
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abortion
rate has become acute in recent days due to the parents' plausible explanation such as not ready for raising a child, at the same time, India is facing more than en number of
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abortion
cases which is
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now
equivalent to divorce cases.
Instead
of making
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abortion
, if any parents don't want to have a baby, they
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have to
take a precaution
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before
they step in enjoyment.
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So
, it could
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prevent
to curb these sorts of problems without having it.

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Although
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it's
kind of
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legal
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it's
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offence
too.
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Because
they are
virtually
killing an unborn infant without the baby consent. Whatever the situation may be, the parents' don't have rights to kill the baby for their beneficial purpose. Although giving a reasonable explanation is an excuse,
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sometimes
it causes considerable adverse impacts among family.
For instance
, last year, my cousin's wife was pregnant and due to financial burden and misunderstanding between family, they had decided to abort the baby and
still
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now
they are facing the consequences of not having the infant and that
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destroy
the bonding relationship among lovers.

In conclusion
, what I believed is,
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abortion
is
moderately
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legal
in my country and
also
is
still
increasing, despite having
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negative
impacts I
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think
instead
of encouraging we should recommend certain procedures to curb the problems with
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some
restriction and proper instruction. If the
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government
announced
duly
about the
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abortion
is an illegal one, then it will become more
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positive
impacts on society.
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IELTS essay Describe a book you are readingYou should saywhat the book is aboutwhen you read ithow long you have been reading it forand explain what you like about the book v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
422 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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