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Describe a book that you read for your studies.

Describe a book that you read for your studies. pXab2
Reading books is not my passion at all but I read books to pass my leisure hours. Recently I have read a book name George and The Big Bang. The work revolves around the rescue of the world of George, a smart, curious boy. Bored and annoyed when his family has a new member, no longer cares about him as much as before and his best friend Annie has a new player, abandons him, George plunges into experiments with Eric, Annie's father, in Switzerland to create new physical theories threatening life worldwide. So he made a trip into space to save the world from disaster. The book will bring readers to the cosmological knowledge and physics that come from George's super-intelligent mind and a series of journeys through time and space, intense duels to foil his conspiracy. organization. We invite you to read to experience the journey and enrich your knowledge.
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is not my passion at all
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I read
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to pass my leisure hours. Recently I have read a
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name George and The
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Big
Bang. The work revolves around the rescue of the world of George, a smart, curious boy. Bored and annoyed when his family has a new member, no longer cares about him as much as
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before
and his best friend Annie has a new player, abandons him, George plunges into experiments with Eric, Annie's father, in Switzerland to create new physical theories threatening life worldwide.
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So
he made a trip into space to save the world from disaster. The
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book
will bring readers to the cosmological knowledge and physics that
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come
from George's super-intelligent mind and a series of journeys through time and space, intense duels to foil his conspiracy.
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. We invite you to read to experience the journey and enrich your knowledge.

IELTS essay Describe a book that you read for your studies.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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