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Is the idea you can do anything good?

Is the idea you can do anything good? 8LJqx
The idea that anything can be achievable if they make enough effort could be widely heard by parents in some cultures. I would like to discuss the positive and negative infuluence for children. The advantage would be that we can encourage kids to draw a big dream and work hard toward it. In deed, I personaly believe every children have unlimited potentials in every aspect. It is important for parents or teachers not to limit thier future possibilies and options. On the other hand, I would like to point out the importance to tell them that everyone has the different situation and every human beings has the unique body and talent. For example, if your kid was born as Asian appearance and wants to become White look, it is impossible and should not encourage to dream it. In that sense, “anything” could be sometmes incorrect. Adults should always watch out thier goals are appropriate.
The
idea
that anything can be achievable if they
make
enough
effort could be
widely
heard by parents in
some
cultures. I would like to discuss the
positive
and
negative
infuluence
for children.

The advantage would be that we can encourage kids to draw a
big
dream and work
hard
toward it. In deed, I
personaly
believe every
children
have unlimited potentials in every aspect. It is
important
for parents or teachers not to limit
thier
future
possibilies
and options.

On the other hand
, I would like to point out the importance to
tell
them that everyone has the
different
situation and every human beings has the unique body and talent.
For example
, if your kid
was born
as Asian appearance and wants to become White look, it is impossible and should not encourage to dream it. In that sense, “anything” could be
sometmes
incorrect. Adults should always
watch
out
thier
goals are appropriate.
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IELTS essay Is the idea you can do anything good?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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