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Cyclist are 15 times more likely to be killed on British roads than car drivers. In the Interests of safety bicycles should not be allowed on roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cyclist are 15 times more likely to be killed on British roads than car drivers. In the Interests of safety bicycles should not be allowed on roads. XloRE
Cycling is the best exercise to stay healthy in today’s era, and the craze of this sport are increasing among the people day by day. It is very low cost maintenance service for all kind of people. Though it is very fruitful activity to ourselves it also compromises with our safety. I think getting killed by an accident in bicycles is the case of lack of safety instructions and not sufficient equipment hangered with the cycles. Age group of teens and adults would prefer to travel by cycles or to do cycling as a hobby, but because of rage of traffic and over-speeding of cars could be a major issue for cyclists’ life. It is not appropriate to ride on same road where other motor vehicles driven. As I mentioned earlier, cycles also lack of safety measures than car like Airbags, ABS Brakes, Brake lights and hazard lights. Due to these causes cyclist cannot be safe as car drivers even if as much as safety instructions they follow. Personally I do not think bicycles should not be allowed on roads as far as roads for both cycles and vehicles are separated. But Yes, for highways there should not be any cyclist allowed as they end up getting in the way of car drivers.
Cycling is the best exercise to stay healthy in
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people
day by day. It is
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very
low cost maintenance service for all kind of
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people
.
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it is
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very
fruitful activity to ourselves it
also
compromises with our safety.

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think
getting killed by an accident in bicycles is the case of lack of safety instructions and not sufficient equipment
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hangered
with the
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cycles
. Age group of teens and adults would prefer to travel by
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cycles
or to
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do cycling
as a hobby,
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but
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because
of rage of traffic and over-speeding of
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cars
could be a major issue for cyclists’ life. It is not appropriate to ride on same road where other motor vehicles driven. As I mentioned earlier,
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cycles
also
lack of safety measures than
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car
like Airbags, ABS Brakes, Brake lights and hazard lights. Due to these
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causes
cyclist cannot be safe as
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car
drivers even if as much as safety instructions they follow.

Personally
I do not
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think
bicycles should not be
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allowed
on roads as far as roads for both
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cycles
and vehicles
are separated
.
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But
Yes, for highways there should not be any cyclist
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allowed
as they
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end
up getting in the way of
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car
drivers.
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IELTS essay Cyclist are 15 times more likely to be killed on British roads than car drivers. In the Interests of safety bicycles should not be allowed on roads.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
213 words
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