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Describe a activity that you like do in leisure time

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Well, there are a number of activities which one can do in their free time like painting, read books, cooking. But here I would like to talk about a activity which I like to do in my spare time the activity is gardening. I do it with my husband in the from yard of my house. I do it in different parts like some days I watered to plants and plough the mud. A grew a number of flower there. So that is a activity which I like to do.
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which one can do in their free time like painting, read books, cooking.
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which I like to do in my spare time the
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is gardening. I do it with my husband in the
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yard of my
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IELTS essay Describe a activity that you like do in leisure time

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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