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desbribe your closest friend

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when it comes to my closest friend the first person that comes to my mind is Choco mint. This is the nickname I usually that call her because she's so into ice cream favor We first met know each other when we attended to an extra class. She had a slender body with fair complexion which made me impressed for our first meet. She 's a social guy, no doubt that the was the one who tried to strike up a conversation with me first Speaking of her personality, I suppose to say that it againsts mine, white she is very calm & thoughful, i am rather be bad-tempered and conservative sometimes. But from my point of view, she's a perfect side-kick for million reasons that I can't even count. The best one that I always be thankful for is the way the respects me with all the versions of myself with her heart. No matter who i am or who i'm goma be or even who I was, she will have my back and being a great company. We have been though thick and thin together and I hope that our relation will be last forever.

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fair
 complexion which made me impressed for our first
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. She 's a social guy, no doubt that Please check whether a word is missing between 'the' and 'was' or whether 'the' is the correct determiner.
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-tempered and conservative This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
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But
 from my point of view, she's a perfect side-kick for Use "a million" or use a number before 'million'.a million
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 reasons that I can't even count.

The best one that I The adverb 'always' usually goes after the verb 'be'.be always
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 thankful for is the way the respects me with all the versions of myself with her heart. No matter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
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company
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We have been though thick and thin together and I hope that our relation will be last forever. 