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desbribe your closest friend

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when it comes to my closest friend the first person that comes to my mind is Choco mint. This is the nickname I usually that call her because she's so into ice cream favor We first met know each other when we attended to an extra class. She had a slender body with fair complexion which made me impressed for our first meet. She 's a social guy, no doubt that the was the one who tried to strike up a conversation with me first Speaking of her personality, I suppose to say that it againsts mine, white she is very calm & thoughful, i am rather be bad-tempered and conservative sometimes. But from my point of view, she's a perfect side-kick for million reasons that I can't even count. The best one that I always be thankful for is the way the respects me with all the versions of myself with her heart. No matter who i am or who i'm goma be or even who I was, she will have my back and being a great company. We have been though thick and thin together and I hope that our relation will be last forever.
when
it
comes
to my closest friend the
first
person that
comes
to my mind is
Choco
mint. This is the nickname I
usually
that call her
because
she's
so
into ice cream
favor


We
first
met know each other when we attended to an extra
class
. She had a slender body with
fair
complexion which made me impressed for our
first
meet
. She 's a social guy, no doubt that
the
was the one
who
tried to strike up a conversation with me
first


Speaking of her personality, I suppose to say that it
againsts
mine, white she is
very
calm &
thoughful
,
i
am
rather
be
bad
-tempered and conservative
sometimes
.

But
from my point of view, she's a perfect side-kick for
million
reasons that I can't even count.

The best one that I
always be
thankful for is the way the respects me with all the versions of myself with her heart. No matter
who
i
am or
who
i'm
goma
be or even
who
I was, she will have my back and being a great
company
.

We have been though thick and thin together and I hope that our relation will be last forever.
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IELTS essay desbribe your closest friend

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
197 words
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