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what kind of home do you like?

what kind of home do you like? WYrrD
When in think about my favorite home, I imagine a big shack in the forest. There are many different trees and meadow around my darling cottage. i hear the beautiful song of birds when i open the windows. Live in this place whit fresh air, organic fruit and vegetarian is really a dream. I like design my hut whit wooden appliances. I think this lodge is a great home in all of season. For example it's very dreamy that look a white grand and white trees when was covered whit snow in winter or orange and yellow leaf in full. I suggest you try one day in forest shack in spring. Certainly you will have a fantastic experience. In the end i want to say forest, sea, lake, pond, desert and totally nature is my opt to live and enjoy.
When in
think
about my favorite home, I imagine a
big
shack in the forest. There are
many
different
trees and meadow around my darling cottage.
i
hear the
beautiful
song of birds when
i
open the windows.
Live
in this place whit fresh air, organic fruit and vegetarian is
really
a dream. I like design my hut whit wooden appliances. I
think
this lodge is a great home in
all of season
. For
example it
's
very
dreamy that look a white grand and white trees when
was covered
whit snow in winter or orange and yellow leaf in full. I suggest you try one day in forest shack in spring.
Certainly
you will have a fantastic experience. In the
end
i
want to say forest, sea, lake, pond, desert and
totally
nature is my opt to
live
and enjoy.
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IELTS essay what kind of home do you like?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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