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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?

Nowadays, the amount of people rising accelerate all around the world that could be main factor of lacking food among people. The summits are made by leaders of the countries to prevent this issue and in this essay we will provide the cause of this phenomenon and will debate the solutions with relevent examples. During the centure in some underdeveloped countries people are facing with poverty and desease owing to necessity of meal. The employers could not support them with job and work and the main proportion of citizens are living outside without home. Why these people are being poor? Because the large amount of them living in the underdeveloped civilisation. In fact, approximetely, 60% of people who are living in the Earth do not eat adiquate on a daily basis. The researchers have claimed that this number will rise during the next few decades, unless they do not find the way escape from poverty. Nearly 35 percent of people are worrying about surviving for the next day. From the 2000the year untill now too many countries that situated in Europe continent have accepted the people who were come from underdeveloped countries and USA has supported them with money and house. Besides in more developed countries citizens accepted new law about "No more than a child for a family". In China, Russia and Japan this law enforced by government in order to prevent lacking of food and poverty. In conclusion, overpopulation is the main cause of this problem that more intuative countries are try to find the way that influence equal for people in the world.
Nowadays, the amount of
people
rising accelerate all around the world that could be main factor of lacking food among
people
. The summits
are made
by leaders of the
countries
to
prevent
this issue and in this essay we will provide the cause of this phenomenon and will debate the solutions with
relevent
examples.

During the
centure
in
some
underdeveloped
countries
people
are facing with poverty and
desease
owing to necessity of meal. The employers could not support them with job and work and the main proportion of citizens are living outside without home. Why these
people
are being poor?
Because
the large amount of them living in the underdeveloped
civilisation
. In fact,
approximetely
, 60% of
people
who are
living in the Earth
do not eat
adiquate
on a daily basis. The researchers have claimed that this number will rise during the
next
few decades, unless they do not find the way escape from poverty.
Nearly
35 percent of
people
are worrying about surviving for the
next
day.

From the 2000the year
untill
now
too
many
countries
that situated in Europe continent have
accepted
the
people
who were
come
from underdeveloped
countries
and USA has supported them with money and
house
.
Besides
in more developed
countries
citizens
accepted
new law about
"
No more than a child for a family
"
. In China, Russia and Japan this law enforced by
government
in order to
prevent
lacking of food and poverty.

In conclusion
, overpopulation is the main cause of this problem that more
intuative
countries
are try to find the way that influence equal for
people
in the world.
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IELTS essay Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
5.5
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