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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. what is the cause of this ?what measures can be the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?

Demand for food is increasing worldwide. what is the cause of this? what measures can be the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough? eYEx
In the contemporary Era it is undoubtedly true that the requirement of food satisfaction is being surging all over the globe this essay will explicit a prominent reason of food scarcity as it is produced due to the overpopulation and on the other hand International community can make ensure the supply of grain by providing new methods of farming to farmers. 2 comments with the chief cause of increasing the demand of food is a plethora of population in the world to elaborate it the methods of yielding crops are traditional and in this way the crops are easily affected by climatic changes which becomes the issue of foods shortage in India to elucidate the surveys conducted by authority that about a 10 million kilogram food is produced per year until the enumeration of people is recorded 11 million in 2017 and expected that it will double in upcoming years as a result deficiency of wood creates a predicament situation for people life9
In the contemporary Era it is
undoubtedly
true that the requirement of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
satisfaction is being surging all over the globe this essay will explicit a prominent reason of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
scarcity as it
is produced
due to the overpopulation and
on the other hand
International community can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
ensure the supply of grain by providing new methods of farming to farmers. 2 comments with the chief cause of increasing the demand of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is a plethora of population in the world to elaborate it the methods of yielding crops are traditional and in this way the crops are
easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
by climatic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
which becomes the issue of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
shortage in India to elucidate the surveys conducted by authority that about a 10 million kilogram
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is produced
per year until the enumeration of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
is recorded
11 million in 2017 and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
that it will double in upcoming years
as a result
deficiency of wood creates a predicament situation for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
life9
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IELTS essay Demand for food is increasing worldwide. what is the cause of this? what measures can be the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?

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  American English
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162 words
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