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"Dear my beloved woman" - describe the woman you love most and express the love

"Dear my beloved woman" - describe the woman you love most and express the love PLPLp
“God could not be everywhere, and therefore he made mothers”, Rudyard Kipling said. Mother is not just someone who gave you a birth. The word “mother” can not express all the unconditional love and careness for that every mother has given for her child’s better life. For me, she is a unique existence that likes the sun with the warmest shining in my life. Yet, through my growth, there would be rainy days or storming days, but this sun is still there, following my steps. My mother nearly reaches the age of forty. She still looks charming although almost all the time she has is devoted to taking care of her four children and working as a tailor to earn a living. It is the fact that giving a good upbringing is enough for every mother to receive her children’s best appreciation. My mother is not a well-expressed woman, which makes her way of being a mother harder. In my childhood, I often felt sad when she reprimanded me for my flaws at school. Actually, my mind was full of unhappiness, then these questions came: “Why did she not see my effort? ”, “Why did she always say that I was not good enough? ” and “Why did my mom love my sister much more than me? ”. . . . At that time, the feeling of envy made me depressed a lot. Magically, all these negative thoughts were blown by my mother’s smile when she saw my flying color. Although this way of congratulation was so small, I seemed to strengthen my mind and made a determined effort to make. . . my mom smile more. It could not be denied that her smile is so appealing, which led to my new thought - I hope that she is always happy and has more delightful smiles than usual. From time to time, I realized that my mom is trying to understand and catch up with us, by her small gesture. We sometimes have a brief talk about my school-life and relationship. She is such an introvert that she finds it hard to speak to her daughter, but then, I feel comfortable after revealing all my feelings to her. I simultaneously realize that she is always the one who stands by my side in every examination. She lifts me though the way is so far from our house and even when I failed the exam. She lends me a sympathetic ear and supports me a lot, which heals my soul tolerantly. When my family met a terrible event, my mom was the most vulnerable one - she suffered from casualties of domestic violence. At this time, I wished that I could have given her a warm embrace, but eventually, I could not do anything but cry. Wind still blows, my mom is still a heart-warming woman that takes good care of us. I perceive the necessity of expressing my love to my mom - at least, it will make her feel our respect and love. Everyday, I learn to say “thank you” and “I love you” to her and become the best child that she prouds of. Up to now, I have not had enough courage to say “I love you, mom. Nothing is more than your meaningful motherhood. I am so happy as you still stand by my side. ” October 20th is a celebration day to appreciate Vietnamese women. On this day, all women are appreciated and sent best wishes for what they have devoted. Don’t wait for this day to express how you love your mother, learn to embrace her as soon as you can. Last but not least, , one of the most significant reasons for our existence is giving love to people in our own world, especially to the one who has given us this existence.
“God could not be everywhere, and
therefore
he made mothers”, Rudyard Kipling said.
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Mother
is not
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just
someone who gave you a birth. The word
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“mother”
can not express all the unconditional
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love
and
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careness
for that every
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mother
has
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given
for her child’s better life. For me, she is a unique existence that likes the sun with the warmest shining in my life.
Yet
, through my growth, there would be rainy days or storming days,
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but
this sun is
still
there, following my steps.

My
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mother
nearly
reaches the age of forty. She
still
looks charming although almost all the
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time
she has
is devoted
to taking care of her four children and working as a tailor to earn a living. It is the fact that giving a
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good
upbringing is
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enough
for every
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mother
to receive her children’s best appreciation.

My
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mother
is not a well-expressed woman, which
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makes
her way of being a
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mother
harder. In my childhood, I
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often
felt sad when she reprimanded me for my flaws at school. Actually, my mind was full of unhappiness, then these questions came: “Why did she not
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see
my effort? ”, “Why did she always say that I was not
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good
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enough
? ” and “Why did my
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mom
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love
my sister much more than me? ”.
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At that
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time
, the feeling of envy made me depressed a lot.

Magically
, all these
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negative
thoughts
were blown
by my
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mother’s
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smile
when she
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saw
my flying color. Although this way of congratulation was
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so
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small
, I seemed to strengthen my mind and made a determined effort to
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make
.
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my
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mom
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smile
more. It could not
be denied
that her
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smile
is
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so
appealing, which led to my new
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thought
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-
I hope that she is always happy and has more delightful
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smiles
than usual.

From
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time
to
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time
, I realized that my
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mom
is trying to understand and catch up with us, by her
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small
gesture. We
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sometimes
have a brief talk about my school-life and relationship. She is such an introvert that she finds it
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hard
to speak to her daughter,
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but
then, I feel comfortable after revealing all my feelings to her. I
simultaneously
realize that she is always the one who stands by my side in every examination. She lifts me though the way is
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so
far from our
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house
and even when I failed the exam. She lends me a sympathetic ear and supports me a lot, which heals my soul
tolerantly
.

When my family met a terrible
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event
, my
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mom
was the most vulnerable one
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-
she suffered from casualties of domestic violence. At this
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time
, I wished that I could have
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given
her a warm embrace,
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but
eventually
, I could not do anything
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but
cry.

Wind
still
blows, my
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mom
is
still
a heart-warming woman that takes
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good
care of us. I perceive the necessity of expressing my
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love
to my
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mom
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-
at least, it will
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make
her feel our respect and
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love
.
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Everyday
, I learn to say “thank you” and “I
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love
you” to her and become the best child that she
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prouds
of.

Up to
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now
, I have not had
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enough
courage to say “I
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love
you,
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mom
. Nothing is more than your meaningful motherhood. I am
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so
happy as you
still
stand by my side. ”

October 20th is a celebration day to appreciate Vietnamese women. On this day, all women
are appreciated
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
best wishes for what they have devoted. Don’t wait for this day to express how you
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love
your
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mother
, learn to embrace her as
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soon
as you can. Last
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but
not least,
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,
one of the most significant reasons for our existence is giving
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love
to
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people
in our
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own
world,
especially
to the one who has
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given
us this existence.
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IELTS essay "Dear my beloved woman" - describe the woman you love most and express the love

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
641 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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